Crouching Tuna

Well, rewrote the whole prologue. Hope this one catches your attention. edit: Now I noticed this should go to Fantasy. Oh well..

This is a rather old topic, but I think it's better to post my question here instead of making a new topic. The novel I'm working on is similar to ...

Aww, it's all good. Thanks for the review! I put in the first two chapters, if you want to check them out. Actually, please do so =) cheers Tuna

Thanks for the review again Pip sir! I think this is the last chapter I'll ask you to review to, until I get the general idea sorted out. Chapter 2 ...

Hello I reckon it's hard to just focus on a single chapter at a time, so I'm going to post enough chapters so the readers can see how this novel's ...

Ahha! Who would've thought I'd bump into a fellow Indo by clicking a random title? Well, reading this gave me the feeling when I read the teen Indo novels, but ...

I like the replies! Thanks! I guess I also need to believe in the beginning I chose before I whine about it =) There's one thing that's still in my ...

Helo, This is my biggest question while im writing my fiction novel. It'll be great if someone can help. So, I already plotted all the scenes, had all the key ...

Heya! I'm back! I put my first chapter up Or if you want to have another look at the prologue, since I added and reduced some parts there. cheers Tuna

Hello ! Please have a look at my prologue to my novel I hope it's interesting enough for you to review. cheers Tuna

Hello, please take a look at my prologue. Even though there are already lots of comments, I did lots of changes so I'm not sure if those are enough. cheers ...

Please review my prologue to my novel, even though it's a bit fantasy-ish, that's not the only content of the story. Thanks a lot!

Here's the first chapter from my novel. I've re-written this so many times so I think there are some things mentioned more than once, or some I may forgot to ...

I kind of like it, but I hope this one will have something more than suicidal intentions. I walk along the New York streets alone. I check the windows, seeing ...

Pip sir, I'm glad you really did give me a review on the problem I was having. I'm still constantly changing and fixing and updating that piece, so if you ...